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This story was written for a tumblr girl I corresponded with. I asked her to tell me something she had never told anyone else - and she gave me a wonderfully intimate little story of her needing a pee in a crowded bar with a huge queue to the single toilet. So she is my heroine, but everything else is embellished. Hope you like.

So much wicked fun in a short story! Thank you!

Well done, EB. It worked for me.

Perfect!