by His_fag_wife
Would have been a better story if you could decide on a name for your character. Is it George or Georgia ? Made it very distracting. Hard to believe you are publishing a story with such obvious mistake
I always say, it's not a good sex story unless there's a wall of text ranking all the main characters kinks from 1 to 10
I really liked the theme and direction of this story, but gave up on page 1 because of the lack of semi-colons to separate the list of likes and dislikes. Being submissive is not an excuse for bad grammar (quite the opposite, in fact).
... because they are so divorced from reality. Very few women are interested in men in frilly things, although some women do get involved in this scene, in return for money.
This story surprised me. Scorching hot tale. 5 stars..
Your sentence should have said such (an) obvious mistake and ended with a period.
Wish there was more to this story. Wouldn't mind being Pete for the most part. :)
Couldn't stop reading. Please finish her journey and take us where you want her to go. Wishing it was my journey. Great story. Please finish
Would be pretty good if it wasn’t an unfinished story that just leaves you hanging.