All Comments on 'On a Whim'

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Mymantoy999Mymantoy999almost 5 years ago
Okay, this always irritates me

Lesbian, noun

Definition of lesbian: a woman who is a homosexual

By virtue of the men in the story involved in sexual situations, this story is in the wrong category. While I understand that neither of the slaves ever actually identified as a Lesbian, it was implied when placed in the Lesbian category. It probably would have been better suited for the "BDSM" category or maybe even "Erotic Stories" category.

Ed

cuckold_bi_boicuckold_bi_boialmost 5 years ago
loved it

I am a male slave and for 15 years since I retired and became 24/7 and it sounds like our home over the years. My life since We Married has been love and special Thanks for the story...

krispos1krispos1almost 5 years ago
One of Your Better

I enjoy most of your stories, but this one was much more polished than others that I have read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

pretty good story, very well written and easy to follow, that being said this story glorifies slavery with "love", believing in lala land. still a nice read.

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