All Comments on 'On Daddy's Ranch Ch. 01'

You could at least provide the daughter with a name.

I hope someone rapes you, you pervert!

I don't know what the rape concern is here. Clearly this is nonconsent, but come on, you decided to read an incest story. Clearly Taboos are going to be broken. I thought it was very erotic and enjoyed it.

This was a totally hot story. it would have been nice to have seen her with a name, but all in all the story did its job for me :)

Hot. I liked how he whipped her.

God damn.. that has to be one of the hottest stories I've ever chosen to read on this site.. I fingered myself whilst reading, and my orgasm was incredible. VERY nice job

suck daddy's lolli??? His big sausage??? Is still laughing!!!! Dude that was so retarded. Use grown up words ok.

it has been a long time since i have stumbled across a story that made me finger myself and pinch my nipples ..... even the few small grammatical errors could not dispell the 'heat' i felt rising throughout my body ... and reach for my clit vibe

it was perfect ... even the thoughts about another girl sucking on her breasts were an added, lol, throb!! until 'she' found control - why oh why couldn't 'daddy' retain full control of her.

rape? non-consensual? didn't 'she' admit from the start 'she' wanted it. 'she' did have a name just perhaps u failed to read the start. i write third party too ... perhaps it is the mystery of the unknown that keeps some of us entranced

thank you and i look forward to reading chapter two

obviously her name is Zoe since the first line of the story it says "zoe was so excited" retards.

Loved it made my own little cunt wet and achy