All Comments on 'On Holiday with My Parents Pt. 02'

What a wonderful tease. I hope that they'll finally achieve their family climax in the next chapter.

Great sexy story

This is the first time I read a story from this author and I was blown away. Very sexy, nice flow and exhilarating narration. Thank you so much.

Love this. Please continue this series

How long are they on vacation? 2 weeks? I’ll be looking for more chapters here! Doing great so far!

I’m loving your sexy writing. Thank you for putting a sparkle in my day.

The buildup has been great, but I do hope that Pt. 03 will have some serious Daddy/Daughter sex. (Grin)

The descriptions and the story have me wanting to go!

Really enjoying the developing story, can HARDly wait for the dinner menu: who's for dinner and cream pie dessert for everyone!

More Please!

This family has me very interested in their continuing adventures, I can't wait to see where this goes next.

Loving, sexy and beautiful story. Keep it cumming. Thank you.

Still some issues with grammar...this was supposedly "just revised"...could have used some editing...

Still, **4**stars...but just barely...I do not comment on stories I give 3 stars or less to, just s ore and move on...