by WirdSmiff
Enjoyed this.
FYI, accidentally hit report story when trying to go to next page. Sorry!
Don’t listen to Childish remark! Please continue. There are so many distractions you can take this! Look forward to the next!
I loved the premise and the story but I had to stop reading as I couldn't take reading the words Daddy and Mummy any more. The story is told from the daughter's POV. There's only the three of them in the room. If you say he/his or she/her, we know you're referring to her father or mother. It's not necessary to say Daddy and/or Mummy 12 times per paragraph. I apologize if this sounds mean but I wanted to give you my honest opinion.