All Comments on 'On Holiday with My Parents Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fun!

Enjoyed this.

FYI, accidentally hit report story when trying to go to next page. Sorry!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Nice story expeting more soon.Congrats.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More, more, more, please

Wow! Awesome story, love to hear more.

tallman441tallman441about 4 years ago
excellent

Very Hot. Definitely share more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Baby Bump Time

Give the daughter what everyone wants her to have.

RodThrustinRodThrustinabout 4 years ago
Yes!

No further comment required.

doogdoog1doogdoog1about 4 years ago
Great story!

Don’t listen to Childish remark! Please continue. There are so many distractions you can take this! Look forward to the next!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 4 years ago

I loved the premise and the story but I had to stop reading as I couldn't take reading the words Daddy and Mummy any more. The story is told from the daughter's POV. There's only the three of them in the room. If you say he/his or she/her, we know you're referring to her father or mother. It's not necessary to say Daddy and/or Mummy 12 times per paragraph. I apologize if this sounds mean but I wanted to give you my honest opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot!Hot! Hot! WoW!

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