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Epilogue:
“So how do you feel about Laverne now?” Julie was rubbing her tits all over me as she hugged me close.
“I don’t care anymore… why?” I hugged her; and yes her tits still felt fabulous pressed into me.
“Just wondering if you’ve forgiven her or not.” She looked up at me.
“I have no feelings either way anymore. She’s just a part of my past. I don’t feel anger or like. She’s just the same any stranger I might meet on the street. Why are you bringing her today of all days?” I was uncomfortable in my monkey suit.
“Because, she’s in the back row bawling her eyes out.” She whispered in my ear. “I doubt she’ll stay, but if she does… remember the last wedding we were at?” She giggled.
“I um….” I was stammering.
“Sorry sweetie, time for me to go. I just thought I’d give you fair warning.” She skipped off, her tits bouncing for the enjoyment of every male to follow, as she made her way to the back of the church. The music swelled when she got in her place and gave the preacher the high sign.
She walked down the aisle as my eyes were centered on the woman standing behind her. The procession stopped and we all turned to the front of the small church.
“Dearly beloved, we are gathered to join these two people in Holy Matrimony. If there is anyone who knows a good reason why these two should not be joined together, speak now or forever hold your peace.” He looked around.
I heard a sob as a door closed. “Do you Thomas David Striker Junior; take this woman, Mary Teresa Jacobson; to be your lawfully wedded wife….”
“Yes I do..!” I said out loud, looking at her green eyes.
“Not yet son, I still have my part to finish.” The preacher said as the crowd laughed and the love of my life smiled at me.
You see, sometimes even us assholes get lucky. Once I followed my dad’s suggestion, the rest fell into place. So, I’m standing here wondering how it is going to feel to make love to my wife for the first time. Something tells me it’s going to be worth the wait.
What do you think?
Post script: Granted it isn’t quite BTB, but I thought the ends fit the crime. And yes, I feel betrayal by either partner should still be a crime. You make a promise, and breaking the rules should have consequences. Still in the end, Tom did end up with a true loving faithful wife; as it should be. Thanks for reading, and let me know what you think.
Myhands316.
- COMMENTS
ttt594 months agoGood story, but can't help wondering if he may not have been better off by himself. Julie seems OK but what if she slips up even a little. Not sure he won't walk away again since he was burned pretty bad.
Mustang88LXover 3 years agoNice to read about a guy who uses commen sense and has some self-respect not to put up with anyone's bullshit. Thanks for the good read.
Loejtcalmost 5 years agoI would normally rate the story as a 3. I very rarely give 5's. But this one I went to a 4 because I liked the creativity of the plot, thought Tom's personality was well developed so that the ending should not come as a surprise to the reader.
Specifically Tom is forward focused. He's makes it clear he is looking for a life partner who shares his dream and he is willing to negotiate to develop a shard dream. He knows when to walk away from a bad situation. He made it very clear to LaVerne and the reader that he's a black and white kind of guy but if you are true to him and respect him, you'll never have to doubt his loyalty or love.
Many commenters have revealed the loose ends of the story. How did Tom know about the camera man? Who is Mary, was she HIS therapist, or just a girlfriend who happened to be a therapist? What was she reading? What did the comment about "being ditched at a wedding" mean.
I thought the infidelity device actually degraded the story. Tom experienced disrespect throughout the "home buying" sequence. That was the real deal breaker. The relationship was over when she ignored Tom's input and bought the house she wanted. Whether she cheated was irrelevant.
But oddly none of these questioned distracted me from the essence of the plot.
notredame43about 6 years agothe grammar Nazis etc may be right about things but the foundation of a good story is there. Keep it up and see what happens youll get better like riding a bike or skiing. I do like the fact that the man acted like one and didn't take any shit. I also think you did a good job with showing PTSD without selling it short or overdoing it dramatically. Nice job hands
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI thoroughly enjoyed all three of your “Loving Wives” stories. I hope you keep contributing to this category.
Anonymousover 6 years agoYou have no understanding of how to write a story. Your writing is like the spoken word not like a story. Your story is very difficult to read. You should just give this past time up for the sanity of the readers of Literotica!
Jackallsover 6 years agoSorry to say but this story mainly consists of incoherent blabber shit. I really couldn't tell what the story was about. Thumbs down.
IndyOnalmost 7 years agoMy high school buddy was the most fun care free guy you would ever meet... Then Viet Nam happened! He became a pilot on a helicopter gun ship providing cover for medevac helicopters. In his two and a half tours he was shot twice by ground fire and his helicopters were shot down four times. He spent almost more time in the hospital than he did flying. After being shot down for the fourth time it was his psych evaluation that sent him home with four purple hearts and the silver star. For two years he tried to go back to Nam but the military was done with him. While home he wouldn't have anything to do with his former friends, family or anyone else. Another pilot buddy of his told him to go to Louisiana and apply for a job flying choppers out to the oil rigs. He left Seattle in 1970 and has never returned. I have talked to his sister a few times over the years and she tells me he is doing OK but never recovered. War is Hell!
