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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Musicians for the win, my friend

For starters, I loved the song you wrote - is there a tune? If not, I'm gonna make one up for myself.

And of course, I frickin' loved the story itself! (Could use a little proofreading for runon sentences, but otherwise good grammar and whatnot)

Colin said "Next time, I'll come in your pretty little mouth". Can there be a next time? 8D Maybe a DP?

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