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I'm speechless... Great work

An amazing read, didnt want to put it down for a second, thankyou for the ride

Great plot, good grammar, very horny story best i have read in a long time here. Well done thanx

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An amazing story and very well written. Oh and HOT AS HELL.

Good story. Very hot. Thanks for sharing.

Only because if you had made it a valentines day story you would have won the competition. Five stars. And five more.

Excellent story. Such good writing. Very hot stuff. Tied for best story ever in my mind.

Damn. I loved that.

Very yummy indeed. Loved the ending too..;) Thank you for sharing this with us!

I loved the build up of the story....the voyuerism....it was paced really well.

We've gotten to a point on this site where we get about 2-3 REALLY good stories per year in this genre and congrats, you just nailed one of them!

Well done story and kept me interested all the way.

Just wondering if there might be a 2nd chapter of Britanny and his father in the works, perhaps even a 4some?

5 stars

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Thanks to all that commented. Just to answer a few questions, one chapter only. I thought about the foursome but it just didn't seem right in the end. And for those that have an idea what I'm talking about, the connection is Home Shopping. Cheers.

It's perfect, thanks for not including foursome. Please write a mom son sexting story (sharing each other's photos)/ a modeling for son(you pants, short skirts, boyshorts, string bikini), / a stranded mom son in a desert(surviving without water),/ pissing in her son's water bottle on a car ride in a rainy day /or another underwear model mom story like home shopping. We still couldn't forget about that camel toe test in that story. Try to include more transparent yoga pants. Will never forget that hottest Camel toe test, ever. Thank you

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When she see her daughter/mom pissing in her son/brother's mouth. Won't say it happened to me. But I pissed on my sister's pussy once.

what a brilliant and clever story. it was a little obvious - but i didn't mind at all. Very well written. I agree - no more chapters - but i look forward to another one of your sexy stories soon!!

See above. One of your best.

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Loved the story and the hot sex! I figured that the after and daughter in law had a thing going. Glad it worked out for everyone.

The whole dad and Brittney affair which was way before the mom and son ever even happened left a bad taste in my mouth and soured me on the story. I know you used them as a vehicle to let the mom and son be together in the end but they were still cheating on them before and flaunting it. The mom knowing about it also kinda made it worse still and Adrian was like it's cool dad that have been fucking my wife behind my back. I mean I just started fucking your wife/my mom for a few days so it's all even steven lol. Anyway I really enjoyed all your stories I've read so far and am really not that upset with the dad/wife thing cause overall it was a good story. Keep up the good work.

I loved the story. A foursome ending would have been OK with me especially since you aren't doing another chapter.

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Not a bad story...

A bit convoluted, with a predictable ending. But I still enjoyed it. THANKS

Outstanding story, it started out a little bit slow and I had doubts, then in your typical fashion you took over and wham the story just blossomed. How you are able to remove all doubts to blossoming the love between a mother and son. It amazing and so wonderful to read.............():\

I am thinking of writing myself and let me tell you, your style will be a huge influence!! Well done, a beautiful story, amazing!! Thank you so much