All Comments on 'On Patrol'

I wish he would stop me!!

Great story, thank you!

Fantastic!

Perfectly done!

Man, amazing story.Best in a long time!

Incredibly erotic. Loved the build-up, the pacing, and the descriptive nature.

A masterpiece.

you only forgot one thing. cop cars have cameras lol.

brilliantly brought up to date. Great writing, thanks.

Very well executed story, and a previous comment about cameras, I’m not sure about you but I for one, would LOVE to see that footage.

I've been reading stories on this site for many years and I think this is my absolute favorite! From the grammatically correct text to the visually descriptive content, this is a very well written story. I LOVE it!! Thank you!

I like your writing style. How about more than one story every twelve years.

Alan

A true masterpiece of erotic writing. I did not skip a single line.

Thank you!!

Great story, perfect build up. Thank you!

The hottest sexiest story on this site.

What a story , wow. You are truly an amazing writer, you have captured every moment brilliantly and exotically. I loved it

5/5

I've read both of your stories, and they are superb!

Like others, I wish you'd post more often, but if time is what's needed for you to attain this quality...I will patiently wait years once again.

Thank you!

Reading your art is (ALMOST) as good as being there experiencing every moment, every sensation. PLEASE keep them cumming...would love to hear (more) from you

Whoa.... What s STORY....

I could virtually SEE evey move, every facial expression, every sign, beatiful curve of the Gentle and Respectful lady, every breathtakingly handsome manifistation of refined Manliness of the Firm and Strong Officer... His uniform... her airy blouse... his power... her lith... his metal budge... her silky skin... the lights of car... the dead of night and breaths of cold dump air in the dead of night

Goodness, what a range of emotions and images... I loved your language and your style and love the way you understand human beings... I could identify myself with both your characters, even though more with the lady... and that was so beautiful.

Thank you, Massagedalot. A lot )

Will read more, this again, and also other your creations, definately.

Didn't even make it to the end! This story was hot, hot, hot. Great build up, perfect level of detail...definitely did the trick. Thanks (from a redheaded soccer mom ;)

Best story I’ve read in a while

Oh my goodness, this is a wonderful story. So sexy, slow and so detailed. I love the restraint that they both show at first, which makes for such a juicy, throbbing buildiup. How incredibly hot. Thank you so much! Well done!

One of the best stories I’ve ever read on here. Hits all the right notes. Incredibly hot and also intelligent which makes it way hotter. Please write more!

One of the best stories I have read in a while. It would be great if you continue this story line. I’d like to know what happened!! Did he call her? Did they see each other again? Did this encounter lead to something more?

The best sex story I’ve ever read.

It was one of the best I have read. Smooth with details making you feel as you are watching. Very good

I’ve never commented on a story before, but this was very well done. I liked how it wasn’t about a bribe or anything, just what they both needed. Very sexy and classy.

Excellent story, very well written, classy. Maybe could have been a bit more explicit on the last part but overall one of the best I've read in a long time!

This is without a doubt the hottest thing I've ever read in my life.

As a officer myself I loved your story. It was sexy and erotic. Thank you very much! I

Just like a fantasy of mine,well written & exciting to visualize happening!! Thankyou.

I can't even right now.... This story drive me freaking crazy and makes me sooooo wet. I wish there was a sequel 😉

I was well into page one

when I skipped back to determine the category.

By then I was hooked.

Glad I overlooked the category before I started to read.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Paul in Oklahoma

...that I have read this 12 times or something. It's a go-to.

Nom X a million

Very descriptive and very well done. I will say though, the cop making it seem like he enjoyed roughing up people and the "it would be he word versus mine" parts were very off putting. Shit like that is why people hate cops

Fantastic! Had to finish the story even after I finished.

Wow! Next chapter please…

What a beautifully descriptive well paced story. I loved the caring attitude running alongside the physical action.

So fucking hot. I wish I was her.

To me, one of the BEST Literotica stories. Good pacing, realistic fantasy, and VERY well written. As a sex therapist (which I am) I would encourage patients to read this. GREAT JOB!

Very nice story! Well done!

I usually don't read long stories. 2 pages is already too long. But I found myself surprisingly going through this one till the end. Really nice story. 5 stars. Great inspiration for adjusting the dialogue to the situation.

The only thing missing - according to me - is some more active sentences once into action. But that's just me, I guess.