All Comments on 'On Point'

by DebrasFantasy101

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Too much basketball and other stuff and not enough sex

I don't care that they're going to state, lol

DebrasFantasy101DebrasFantasy101about 8 years agoAuthor

Yeah... sorry. It felt weird without the back story and I wrote this on personal experience, so going to state was kind of a big deal for me. Food for thought, I'll remember it for next time though! Thanks

CuddlyCoilsCuddlyCoilsabout 8 years ago
Great!

This was a lovely story. Hope to see more from you.

fixer43fixer43about 8 years ago
Yes to backstory

Disregard no-name; the back story, especially if from personal experience, is what sets the stage for the romance.

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