All Comments on 'On Santa's Lap'

interesting writing...please do continue....great work you have here started

Santa needs his little girl, I hope. Please grace us with another chapter!!

Congratulations on your fine writing, and thanks for entertaining us.

Your work was easy reading and about as error-free as I've seen on Literotica. That makes for better reading and let's us better enjoy the content!

Can't wait for chapter 2! :)

You simply have to continue this fantastic story. Soon. 5+

i love the idea of looking out the kitchen window with a crowd just outside and possibly being caught. the hot minx sister-in-law is just an added bonus. maybe a part 2?

i love the idea of looking out the kitchen window with a crowd just outside and possibly being caught. the hot daughter should have seen nothing and be fucked the same way in part 2? In part 3 it should be night and with the wife drunkly sleeping the dad & daughter should fuck right beside her in their bed

lets not get the whole family involved though. sis in law n the daughter (on separate occasions) is nice enough. what would be even nicer is if they both have no idea that he's doing the other until one finds out and starts getting jealous and starts competing.

As always, a wonderful story, John. You really know how to write....... among other things.

is she is wanting him to fuck her.

Good storyline and hope to see more.

Thanks for the read

I'd love to do that to my sister in law. :)

still eagerly waiting for part 2.

Sequel?

nice even thought you knew the outcome, wished daughter had walked in earlier and demanded some daddy cock, but maybe that was for part two thats been written

You really should finish this story. You kind of let us hanging.