All Comments on 'On Screen'

It was nice to read a story where one half of the couple doesn't end up being such a prude and going off half cocked.

it was the wife fucking some guy on cam, it was just a little showing off.

4 star rating

Ben is another one.

Why does My Wife have to strip on mine ?" Poor guy can't get any strange a thousand miles from home. Lol. Actually, that's just fine, as long as Shiela looks like Ingrid Bergman. Maybe the two characters should be named Rick & Elsa. Thanks to MGM for making me smile in the morning sans coffee - the electricity went out in Apt. Building!

What a fun little story. Nice job!

how long before Sheila fucks strange cock? ten days without fucking is too long for Sheila and she is not shy about showing her cunt ro strange men!!

Dangerous territory in real life...however, after that episode, if they agreed to use Skype and just flash each other ONLY. That would be a real loving wives story.

Fun story very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

Not bad, of course because you are a good writer, But, a huge coincidence that she happened to find him on the internet. I might have been better if she found his website on his computer, and knowing when he had free time, set a trap for him.

It gets to the same place with less suspension of belief.

a better one Kitten is a tease

The most surprising thing about this story, is how much I fucking loved it!!!!

...and believable!

An erotic vignette.

Well up to your normal standard MGM

is born

Of course the likelihood of husband and wife connecting like this is about the same as getting struck by lightening 10 times in one day but it was a good read.

Very hot but don't stop now. Please tell us what happens on his next trip. Does she show off for more than just her hubby?

JPB & Magmaman grow balls in the same week! Fucking Awesome! This site just got a whole lot better. And this story was a perfect example of a great LW story.

Good story 5 stars. She is not cheat only she does similar as we male people.......

cute story

but good fun.

There is SOMETHING Sweetie is NOT telling Hubby. She stops her e-mails to him at 10PM every night, before the waxing and 'tat, AND also on THE evening. I doubt that was her first FaceTime escapade.

4*

that marriage is on the road to ruin.

They might make it if the restrict their internet to just each other and no others, else I see the end coming eventually.

what a load of rubbish, I do this all the time when I'm bored and home alone and I've been happily married for 33 years.

Usually like your work, but this one, not so much.

Cute and funny story!

Never sure how these things turn out.

Seriously, you think this is some kind of humorous coincidence? Why did this couple Both decide to engage strangers instead of using the Internet to connect with each other? Why would either one believe what the other told them since they both were going outside their marriage for sexual stimulation? Sure, its just a crack, don't worry about it, what could be the harm, the rest of the windshield is just fine. Its just a matter of time and opportunity, bye bye marriage. I wonder if either one of them will really be surprised when it happens?

Thanks for the effort.