All Comments on 'On the Bi-Cycle'

by SemiStraight

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
nice

Would love to be used by guys like that, and I probably would have went on to the gangbang and been used as their slut

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good

However it would of been better with him pulling a train of 10 - 15 guys.. And a few double stuffings and a couple cocks in his mouth at the same time.

SemiStraightSemiStraightabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

In this case I was trying to recall events and even three while being the focus of attention was a bit much for me. These guys had a bit of predator in them and it spun farther than I intended. I do have a version of this from the Top's perspective being written now and while I don't know exactly what he was thinking I have a pretty good guess.

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