All Comments on 'On the Buses, and Off'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great!

I liked the small build up, and loved the way you told it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Very satisfying

Captured modern-day Britain perfectly in your opening paragraphs.

"Teen mums and their toddler children competed with the elderly in a 'who can be the greatest tax drain' competition while taking up as many seats as possible."

That made me laugh.

The latter half was especially hot for me because, if I'm honest, I do have a bit of a fetish for leggings.

More please.

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