All Comments on 'On the Dance Floor: Audrey Sins'

Was readable. But was also very boring.

CHUCK

You had me there. Nice build up. And then the ending😄

HC

You know what a turn off is? A grown man calling his mother 'mommy.' Sorry, your story was going well, holding my interest until the point he called her mommy. After that I read without really caring what was happening.

Some people just don't get it .... I'm an artist. I entered an art contest when I was younger and I won but was asked to to change the & sign to and because when reading the poster it was legible ... yet the & sign was a part of the art work. This is what happens when you have english teachers judging art work instead of artist. Later after I got my degree in art the same & sign is used in multi-million dollar ads. When it comes to writing a book use and but when to creating art english does not apply basically because art is universal and english is limited.

Your stories are very hard to read, since they're not written in proper English.