All Comments on 'On the Governor's Staff'

Haha, love the double entendre.

maybe next one will be more interesting.

I think this story has promise. I was left wanting a bit. These are things I feel could have made it richer. First, was steve gay or straight? Had he done this before? Had he contacted this man he was so close to when his family passed? Maybe not made it home but written at least? I'd have liked for some talking to take place while they had sex. Some moaning at least. This hot sex was happening and there was complete silence it felt like. Had mitch ever felt something for steve? Was there an attraction? He says he's the only son he has left and then fucks him. I liked the relationship between the two. The hot, older man who is in a place of power. I guess more details and just slowing it down would help alot. Overall, a good story. It just was a bit rushed for my tastes. I hope you keep writing. An editor can help point out where some extra details could help.

hey great first story. enjoyed it. hope to read more from you in the future.

it's sad that a good man would be tossed out after a witch hunt just due to who he had sex with. like that boy was going to corrupt him. wouldn't it be better to have the governor clear headed and as happy as possible due to a good relationship with someone who loves him rather than distracted by loneliness and grief?

Very hot! Had me hot and throbbing. Very well written and believable.