All Comments on 'On The Green Line'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

not enough detail pushed his cock into my mouth conveyed nothing of what the woman was feeling same with the one in her fanny no mention for instance of her mouth forcing the foreskin back as it entered that sort of detail makes all the difference

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story

great story although a bit too short more of this please

oldwinooldwinoover 17 years ago
Great start

Hot start to what we hope is a long series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
everything is all good

this was a very good story I hope you make another

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