All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 25'

I didn't like the last chapter when Jeremy cheated and this one too...

Gotta go back the old formula of raunchy, naughty descriptives and drawing out of the action. Don’t skimp out on the payoff when Jeremy and his Mom orgasm (also emphasize “son” and “Mom” more than “Jeremy” and “Jenny” when they cum). The best is when the Mom dares her son to cum inside her or Jeremy relishes in releasing his seed in her womb—though sadly, you excluded the possibility of them ever breeding.

Glad the aim of this story has focused back on the Mom and son dynamic, with occasional inroads by the girlfriend (or vice-versa). Just hope in the coming denouement of this saga, you bring back the nasty, naughty dialogue that made the early chapters exquisite. Namely, have Jenny/Mom verbally goad her son to ejaculate inside her more often, whether in her womb, mouth or ass...preferably the hot, kinky place where her son had come out of 18 years before. Jeremy should also express his thoughts more as he releases his healthy young sperm inside his Mother—his potential children and her grandchildren all swarming (sadly for naught) naughtily into her womb...

Let justin find out , approves the relationship, it will lovely as mom and son spend night on family bed with dads approval

I wish you continue this fantastic story. Don't end it on the next chapter. Best regards!

I just can't with Erin lol she just fucks up the whole mood of the story everytime and her love for Jeremy doesnt seem authentic at all and now she just sleepin with other dudes?? Like it wouldn't have been as bad if it was maybe like a cousin or something she used to have a crush on even tho I still woulda preferred she'd just slept with jeremy only but damn ???

told me the magic that was so forceful in the earlier chapters remains lost and has been lost since Erin's introduction. I said I was done with the story but honestly I could not help seeing if you had gotten it back on track. Sadly, you haven't. There are lots of jerk off stories on this site, more than I can count. With the first 16 chapters you did something quite different for this site. There are very few true love stories between Mother and Son here and you killed it in the beginning for this old romantic. Then unfortunately, you got sucked into the jerk off story vortex and it lost that special feeling it gave the reader. So sad. Still a pleasant read for a jerk off story. Best wishes for your future story lines. LM

Keep continuing! This is the best story on this site....................

Don't listen to the dictators. This story is a masterpiece and can't wait until final chapter. Anonymous commenters are always bitchin' about something

Like Erin found, dad also need to accidentally see lovemaking of jeremy and jenny, let him get aroused and start touching himself. Then he play with them two days giving them opportunity and enjoying himself the view of Jenny's cum dripping over Jeremy's cock. Then he calls jeremy and share the secret of his enjoyment and ready accept himself as cuckold if jenny turns bold and accept Jeremy as her only man in the house.

Justin gives a party for the 3 makes the mon and son dance together him watching, then jeremy starts moves over Jenny and let jeny see justin enjoying the moves with cock out. Jeremy took jenny over her arms infront of justin and carry her to their family room. Justin should follow them and through the slided door he enjoys their love making

Next day jenny , jeremy and justin need to sit together and dicuss the future. After few months Jenny belly begin to grow and jeremy turns to be a good father and justin as a supporter.

These are my views on your story. You can take up or drop it...i hope u will make thinks more hornier with ur words. Please dont encourage erin , jess and erins mom

Submitted the The Finale and the Appendix. Only one more to go after that!

Waiting to read

You do know it takes several days for literotica to review & process submissions right? God you millennials are fucken impatient fucks...take ur Ritalin 🤡🌎✊🏿🙄🇨🇳💰🐒

This is the kinda shit that pisses writers off to where they abandon stories for years on end...we now know who to blame: Mr “What’s Taking So Long??!!!? 😩😩😩” Antifa Cuck

Why are people voting this down? See, this is why authors abandon their stories. Every time they try to add new dynamics, people bitch about it. Onedragon is getting screwed over.

i loved the scene with the wedding dress - very erotic. Can't wait for the next - and sadly - the final chapters. 5 stars. Ignore the ignoramuses who didn't like it!!

I always liked you stories. Everyday i check your new updates.... waiting keenly for new adventures of jenny and jeremy

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