All Comments on 'On the Loveseat Ch. 27'

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YamiBoyYamiBoyalmost 4 years ago
^__^

Loved this rollercoaster of a story. Once again, thanks a lot for your effort and your amazing work. ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I love this epic story!

You can try and make Jenny pregnant. I know you made the part about having her had tubes after last baby. But it would be great idea since Jeremy wished His mom had tge baby instead of Erin. I hope you cosider it. Nice story. The best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please write a sequel to this marvelous story.

I hope there is still a continuation of this fantastic tale!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

i think that the bachelorette party could have includ also erin´s mothers in the last chapter and the the last part with the with all five could have been added in the chapter 24 on the other hand erin anal scene and dad daughter scene have no place because you are telling the story from jeremy point of view

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next: What if???

Mom (Jenny) unties her tubes and dares her son (Jeremy) to fertilize her egg...

DO IT.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Father hides his hidden desire

Let justin enjoy the horniness between mom son ... let him give them hidden opportunity to make love and he enjoys it..

goducks111goducks111almost 4 years ago
5 stars

this is great - i find it very interesting how you created the story, the characters, telling us some vignettes - great stuff. I'm not finished reading yet so i'll probably have more comments - but i don't want to forget to say I'm VERY happy you didn't put in the bachelorette scene!!

OnedragonOnedragonover 3 years agoAuthor
Last installment

Chapter 28: What If? has been submitted.

Hopefully it won't be ten days this time to get published.

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