All Comments on 'On The Rebound Ch. 04'

A wonderful story, I would like to see more about the life of Mark. 5*

I expected a happy ending, but nevertheless it's a very good read. Thank you.

A very interesting character who needs more development either in more chapters, or in sequel stories. I can't agree that the ending is not good, or even happy, because there was no future with Robin. She is going to have a very unfulfilled life and it would be fun to revisit her about fifteen years down the road.

It appears that the only one with the head screwed on straight is Rachel!

And yes, there is more story available, if you care to persue it.

TOLD ABOUT LIFE AFTER THE "WAR" AND HOW SOME DEAL/DEALT WITH RELATIONSHIPS AND MOVING FORWARD. TK U MLJ LV NV IF THE "SAGE" CAN COME UP WITH AN EPILOG OR SEQUEL I AM SURE IT WILL BE WELL RECEIVED. mlj

Thank you all for the comments, good and bad. I have a sequel underway, "Full Court Press", and I will post it as soon as possible.

Your characters are very well written, and believable. I am looking forward to the next installment. Thank you!!

I really liked this series and want to see a new story soon. Thanks for sharing, I really enjoy your work.

comes back with a vengance, pretty good sex for a tune-up. TK U MLJ LV NV

You excel in this type of story!

Romance involves love, this had none. Wrong catagory

The GI was pretty perceptive. It’s too bad he didn't hook up with the older half sister. He seemed to be much more compatible with her. However, he may have thought he still didn't want to have any links to that dysfunctional family even though she broke ties with them. Dysfunctional families have a way of reinstating their ties over time.

Sux sorry