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Click here"Uh?" I croaked, mesmerized as Amy wiggled her bum in invitation.
"When I get home, I want to watch."
Finally found this story and you are a great writer!! Saving that amazing line for a 4th page to put all emphasis on it was genius and hot!! Great work!
Loved the story, but didn't like the fact that he was trying to cover up having sex with Amy. At least showing a bit of conflict in his mind would have been nice, about lying to his loving, very understanding wife, even him making excuses to himself of telling her later in person would have been fine. Straight up trying to lie and cover it up tainted this otherwise beautiful story, but still 5-star worthy.
Perhaps because I have gotten old, and once found my self in a similar situation, and imagined it was me, but that was the hottest story I have ever read here. I hope the next two are half as stimulating. Of course in my situation, since I was always into older women it would not have been a nineteen year old. LOL! Perhaps a thirty-five... Perhaps I should plagiarize the idea and write that one... :-)
Well thanks, Publius68 (and everyone else who's commented). So glad you liked the story. I think you're the first to have found one of my stories through the Author's Hangout. And I didn't even notice where the page break fell until it was pointed out.
Fantastic story. I have to say, I came here after reading on the forum about the fortuitous page break... It was worth the read for that alone. But worth the read for the story, too.
Thanks!
I agree with the other commentators, an excellent, well plotted, and well-written love story with an interesting twist.
Great story! It described exactly why Amy would fall in love with Ben. And how Ben fought the temptation to the end. The ending is any man's dream. What a man would not want a mistress with his wife's approval!
Heh. Thanks, ZekeNoScooter_8. The final page break was a complete accident. Guess it does help the slightly surprising conclusion, though. Very happy to hear it "got you." Look forward to your comments on Chapter 2.
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Great story, awesome characters, I don't know how you did it, but getting the last page break, right there, ir sheer brilliance! I have zero doubt that every single reader turned that page expecting Kate to say "but don't fall in love". I knew it like I know my own name.
And then you got me.
I haven't been got like that in a really, really long time. Thanks.
It's way late. I need to sleep. Fuck it. I'm calling in sick. Gotta read ch 2.
Oh, and Anonymous, Good premise...blah blah blah. If you want to publicly critique, fine. But at least sign your fucking name to it. It's his story. Let him tell it.