On the Side

Man, you are good at this. Good stuff.

Great build up. Looking forward to reading the next part!

Finally found this story and you are a great writer!! Saving that amazing line for a 4th page to put all emphasis on it was genius and hot!! Great work!

You are an amazing writer!

Loved the story, but didn't like the fact that he was trying to cover up having sex with Amy. At least showing a bit of conflict in his mind would have been nice, about lying to his loving, very understanding wife, even him making excuses to himself of telling her later in person would have been fine. Straight up trying to lie and cover it up tainted this otherwise beautiful story, but still 5-star worthy.

Perhaps because I have gotten old, and once found my self in a similar situation, and imagined it was me, but that was the hottest story I have ever read here. I hope the next two are half as stimulating. Of course in my situation, since I was always into older women it would not have been a nineteen year old. LOL! Perhaps a thirty-five... Perhaps I should plagiarize the idea and write that one... :-)

Well thanks, Publius68 (and everyone else who's commented). So glad you liked the story. I think you're the first to have found one of my stories through the Author's Hangout. And I didn't even notice where the page break fell until it was pointed out.

Fantastic story. I have to say, I came here after reading on the forum about the fortuitous page break... It was worth the read for that alone. But worth the read for the story, too.

Thanks!

Great story

I agree with the other commentators, an excellent, well plotted, and well-written love story with an interesting twist.