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chilleywilleychilleywilleyalmost 10 years ago
He didn't so much cum as arrived

Or words to that effect, Great phrase! The story had some continuity issues

When his face was on the sofa which smelled of "sweat and the smell of his shit, that his arse had recently vacated," but then she removed his pants. So who shat on the sofa?

Chilley

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