All Comments on 'On the Trail'

This was so hot and well written! Usually love stories aren't my favorite genre, but you made this so engaging and erotic that I couldn't stop reading. Great story!!

You should be sooooo proud of yourself this story is fantastic I loved every word of it, keep it up.

So sexy - loved it!

This was sooo cute. For a minute I was concerned that poor little Joshy was going to get abused 😬Thank God he was loved and John was respectful about the whole situation. This was good man, I like this😍👍🏾

Excellent. It's really a romantic, love story.

i hope you make a part of him becoming a full time boywife for daddy❤️ love this story🥰