All Comments on 'On Top'

Amazing story, really hot and really kept me in its grip! Really brings in memories ^_^

I just joined the site and submitted my first attempts, and decided to check out the other stories. This one caught my eye, and I'm glad it did ^_^

So, good work and I'll check your other stuff later, now I'm going to sleep. ^_^

nice rhythm, pulling us along for the ride - good stuff!