by hardwoodstudios
Oh my gosh I love this story so much! You are an amazing writer. I literally laughed out loud a few times. The kindergarten teacher part killed me! These characters are spectacular. I must say I love Dean. I’m rooting for these two. Thank you for sharing. I look for your updates daily.
My count got jacked up at the end :( supposed to be 3, 2, 1 but it didn't translate when posted.
OMG! What a fantastic chapter! Your details and descriptions so good I felt like I was there in the room with them! I felt every damn feeling they felt! From Dean to mom to Sammy and finally Rashad. That last scene.. Priceless!! You, Sir, have the gift!!
This may not have any smut, but I loved the drama and angst the chapter brought!
I don't usually comment, but I just wanted to let you know how much I love and appreciate your work. Every time you drop a new chapter it always brightens my day, and every time I finish reading I'm always looking forward to the next. I'll finish off by saying I'm so glad I discovered your marvelous storytelling, and will be a reader for as long as you decide to write.
Interesting and great chapter. Been waiting to see what Sammy's Mom was going to say about the relationship! Nice twist to know she taught Dean! Two cliffhangers here (always a good writer to leave your reader in suspense): Who told Jane and reading about the makeup sex after their first fight in CA !
God I love this story! I wish it was a novel I could sit down and devour. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are a truly gifted storyteller.
This story has completely devoured me, as only a really great story can. Your writing is so beautifully immersive, and emotive. This chapter had me in freaking knots.....
For real, with the twist from Jane?!?!
I kept picking this story up at work. Risky? Maybe. But much the way Dean can't seem ti keep away from Sam, I was finding it exceptionally challenging keeping away from your story. And like Dean and Sam, my interest started off simply sexual (good spicy bits) but it grew into a genuine interest and affection for these characters and their lives. You have a stellar, engorssing writing voice. Much props!
This is one of my favorite stories. I can really feel the intensity of Dean's love for Sammy. I'm so in love with Dean, I feel like I'm Sammy. Marry me, Dean, now. Ha ha ha!!!!!!
I love this story as much as all the other commenters do! And like some of them, I came for the sex and stayed for the romance. My favorite parts are when Dean is really expressing his love for Sam. I love how he notices and ADORES the smallest features of Sam — how his shampoo smells, how his clothes fit, the curl of his hair. I’m no writer, but the way you SHOW that to us is brilliant, and it’s what I think good writers mean when they say you have to show us, not tell us. I could read ten pages of Dean worshiping the tiniest details of his guy — the romantic kind of worship, not the work-your-body-parts kind!
His mom probably found out when Sam left his phone to deal with the broken glass. I hope they really talk things out in the next chapter.
Like everyone else I'm loving the series 😁
Please tell me that this is not the ending? If so, I’ll cry and it won’t be pretty………
Excellent writing. I love how you shift back and forth between what your characters do, and what they are thinking. The scene with Dean and Mrs. Rosenthal was one of the funniest I've ever read.
It's time for Sam to grow up. Any 30 year old who won't tell his mother to back off doesn't deserve someone like Dean. And if Sam won't grow up, I hope Dean realizes that Sam doesn't deserve him and moves on. Dean deserves better.
Hey, wonderful, author. You're on Patreon, no? Are we supposed to head over there and pay up for your stories that we love so much? I wouldn't blame you one bit if you felt it was time to stop giving it away over here when you can make something from it over there. But if that's the case, maybe the maid of honor should come out and tell everyone the wedding's off so we can leave the church? ;-)
For the anonymous commenter directly above me, don't be a dick please :) check my bio :) I'm still posting on here, Literotica just takes 1,000 years to approve :) There's an update in my bio, the next chapter for OaN was submitted on 4/11 to Literotica and is still pending approval :) I'm NOT ALLOWED to mention anything about monetization ("if you want to read more, head over to xxx website to pay me!") in the author's notes, and this comment might not even get approved for mentioning it :) :) :) as long as I'm writing this story, it will continued to be posted here, just a bit slower :) :) :) :) :) :) feel free to get the fuck out of my church though, thank you :} :} :) :) :) :)
Anonymous dick here… I’m truly sorry. I love your work. I authored several of the gushing, praiseful comments. Did not mean to imply anything bad about your intentions. Some chapters ensued pretty quickly, so with this lag, I wondered if maybe you had decided to go where the grass was greener, for which, as I said, I wouldn’t blame you. Sorry my tongue-in-cheek comment didn’t come off as funny. I’m a fan.
Phew. No, I’m sorry lol idk why, that comment just rubbed me eight thousand different ways. It’s not you, it’s me. The chapter has been sitting in my pending for over a week now, it literally drives me insane, and this isn’t a platform that allows any direct communication. I can’t even comment directly back to you and this comment will take hours and hours to post. It was built up frustration with the website, I think.
Now I feel like a huge dick *crying* forgive me, anon
Oh, and I would also like to apologize for all the EXTREMELY aggressive smiley faces.
Again, I am so, so sorry 😭