All Comments on 'Once an O'Connor Always an O'Connor'

So once a criminal, always a criminal. He’s a murderer from a family of murderers. He’s no better than a child molester or a drug dealer.

No fucking wonder she cheated on him, he’s evil.

Surprising and dissatisfying. A more thoughtout conclusion would have changed this story but it was a cop-out ending 3***

Too much violence

Twisted but good

Don’t fuck with an O'Connor!

Nice, short and sweet, straight to the point.

No winners here!

4

Goddamm that was intense!!!!!

Good read needs and epilogue though as feels unfinished.

Man, the thing is, I really don't like murder or killing in the story.

But dang, this one was different.

A unique way for a whore to atone her mistakes.

For a moment there I really was impress with the creativeness of the choices.

I am betting no normal husband can think like this nor do this.

Only those who got scarred bad in life. I know I can't.

That is why I gave a 4* despite my dislike for killing.

Interesting variation on the Hat fields And the Mccoys

Harsh for sure. He would have told her the story, if only to keep what did happen from happening. D

Hateful people doing hateful things.

Nice. Getting the cheating wife to shoot the bastard who seduced her is about the most poetic justice possible.

That was depressing. Probably good enough for a Burn the Bitch story. But still depressing.

Wild, dark and to the point. I gave it 5 stars for being short and to the point in a psycho sort of way.

Dark but I like it. She did the right thing in the end. It was the only scenario where the kids had at least one parent to raise them. The sixth shot might have been for herself.

Six shots? If she just shot herself it's one shot, so she must have shot Matt. From "Tell the kids I love them.," I assume she won't be there to tell them, so she likely ALSO shot herself, that's two shots. Did she shoot Matt five times?

I think I like it better when the revenge is mostly sexual, granted I love a good btb but death is often too severe and too quick a punishment in most cases. It would've been better if the gun wasn't loaded and the whole thing was a test to see where her loyalty really lied.

a little over the top violent, but was definitely a twist to the wife getting caught cheating.

4* Deadly BTB! Extreme justice was served, but it needed more detail and length. Keep writing!

Yeah, right! Now, about this bridge in Brooklyn I'm selling.....

That story came from a very dark place. It was good, but very disturbing.

At first read I wondered why Matt would keep the "affair" going so long as to get caught. I thought, do the guys wife once and you in a way have your revenge. If wants the guy to know what he did he could tell him in one way or another. But I guess being able to get away with it as long as he could may also have played into it. The way he yelled that he had been doing it for a full year rubbed it in.

The ending? Well, you are going to get us all upset with that one! Did she just shoot him or did she also shoot herself! Damn!

Now that’s what l call a BTB

5/5

What?

Not a bad little tale but for all we know she could have shot into the bed six times.

Umm. Sure?

once a turd of a writer ALWAYS a turd of a writer

Wow brutal and original

A very different and new take on the BTB story. Interesting choice she made

I guess this was an attempt to shock, to cause a reaction, because I really don't believe anybody with an IQ in double figures would find this entertaining. Absolutely zero to recommend it: a poor, juvenile plot about brain dead inbreds doing distasteful things, rather like the screenplay of the worst B list slasher movie you'll ever likely to see. If you enjoy any part of this I suggest you seek professional help immediately.

Yeah, the gun humpers/pseudo-Alpha male twinks will love this but honestly I dont feel it came out the way you hoped.

Dark but delightful!

Thats dark, maybe she plugged herself with the sixth shot

Daaayyyyyum!!! That's some old world, Omertà family-type killin'! 5/5!!!

That was pretty good for a short story. I bet there's families like that.

He gave her a multiple choice test, and she apparently chose the right answer. Dark, but very good.

I would not be inclined to marry an O'Connor.

think someone needs to take that oconnor crazy out of the gene pool

Interesting little story thanks for sharing

Bet she regretted marrying that twat.

@sbrooks103x

Six shots? If she just shot herself it's one shot, so she must have shot Matt. From "Tell the kids I love them.," I assume she won't be there to tell them, so she likely ALSO shot herself, that's two shots. Did she shoot Matt five times? - No she missed him twice, then got him the third shot, shot at herself and missed then shot him again to male sure he wasn't playing possum, then shot herself thinking once an O' Conner always an O'Conner.

It was “ok” but the character paints everyone into a corner with no real way out. Kinda dark for such a short story

@ctdans, she must have shot Matt, she fired six shots, the last one presumably killed her, so the first five were probably for Matt. Maybe she tortured him first. Maybe she even shot him six times, but her final statement implied that she wouldn't be seeing her children.

A bit too dark for my tastes but overall pretty enjoyable. Matt has to be about the dumbest character ever written, nearly his entire family wiped out for cheating and decides to get some of that himself. 4 stars.

She paid the price and she went out like a “BOSS BITCH”

Perfect story, she was warned

Modern day Poe.

Damn! 5 stars. Good BTB told in a few words. Nice finish.

I was surprised that I liked it.

Wow! 5*

Great story. Loved it. 5 Stars!

It would be perfect if she killed herself, but I doubt she has any honor. Hopefully he

Pretty dark

Excellently brutal. Normally I do not care for murdering the guy fucking the wife,or the wife for that matter. But in this case it works for the storyline

lol, how the fuck does noone mention to this chick that this guys dad is a mass murderer? and this is a rare story where i feel bad for the guy who fucked his wife. i mean shit his dad was gonna kill a kid because his uncle fucked his wife.

Genius! 5 BIG STARS!

Load of bollocks

I don't know why she apparently shot herself. He made it clear that the family would stand by her, who knows maybe she'll get off on temporary insanity.

From Poe, to turds, to the Brooklyn Bridge...

Quoth the cheater: "Nevermore..."

Nothing to add, I guess. Thanks for the story.

Keep 'em comin'.

Not gonna lie.. Love this Story!

O' Connor must mean simp in Gaelic, unless he's lying about visiting her skank ass in prison. Which is what I'd do....

Harsh ending, but definitely the end.

Should have shot herself as well

A little dark for me, but justice was served

Six shots? I am thinking she offed herself as well. I guess we will never know...

5 stars.

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Top Shelf B.T.BASTARD.!

11/10!!!!!

Oh that’s a great one. So short but so good, set it up so well, characters and dialogue just right

How pleasant to read!!

Top notch BTB.

Since I'm guessing the "taking the coward's way out" would actually include "if you shoot Matt first then yourself", and the coward's way out involves her family never seeing her kids again *and* her kids hating her, I'm guessing she just emptied the gun into Matt.

Beautifully done. 5

Bitches don't get nearly the prison time men do. Good decision.

I read it again. That's dark! I liked it a lot, but I would not suggest it as a solution to the problem.

I liked it

Second time for me, still love it, still 5/5

Yikes! You are on author Viagra or sth. Strong story.

Short, sharp, to the point and deeply satisfying

I sure wish I had some of the good drugs that keep WHACKDOODLE so stinking high. He's not a murderer, his brothers and uncles are not murderers. He's angry that he married a cheating slut. So he confronted the asshole and gave the whore some options. She made all the discisions in this little vignette. I'm just hoping that her plea to "tell the children I love them" means that she shot Matt 5 times, just to be sure, and then put the last round through her mostly vacant head.

A GREAT story! 5 stars

Perfect story and ending. Thanks.

So who was shot?

Whoa!!! Very clever. 👍 👌 👏 5 stars.

Sad and pointless.

Agreed. Sad and pointless.

WOW!! Something else. Irish is serious. The Bear approves.

The BEAR

Good story, just a little too short!

Murder and hate and nothing else doesn’t make a story, not even a bad one. Save what few brain cell you have annd not write angian and leave us Irish out of your thought. (Sure you only have room for one at a time anyway)

Wow! Brutal and to the point.

You get the one-star rating for the gratuitous violence in this story - it was sad and pointless.

I will never accept violence in an LW story, unless there are children involved - then all bets are off.

Hopefully, you do not post any more stories like this one.

Too dark and violent. Not my cup.

I always figure that killing someone was the unimaginative solution to a problem in the LW section or any other section for that matter. It tells me that the author did not have a clever way to handle the situation and lessens the story. Not good.