All Comments on 'Once Upon a Fantasy Ch. 11-12'

This was a pleasant interlude without any major shocks. I admit that I am still very

curious about Andrea's thinking.

Nice romantic story, like it!

Thank you again for sharing your talent with us. Are you able (and would you be willing) to submit the stories you mentioned that had been published elsewhere to this site? As your comments have shown, I think you'd have a lot of appreciative readers.

Ironically, with a teenager at home, I was the one that wouldn’t let my finance move in or for that matter start moving any of her belongings in. My ex on the other hand was already shacked up. She repeated that behavior a number of times, but never remarried. Many years later my son told me how much he respected us for the way we handled things while dating, engaged and after we married.

“I'm not going to bend over backwards to have her at the wedding” – Yet she won’t live with him before they’re married for fear of offending her mother?

Unfortunately I find myself skimming a bit. I think the quality of the writing is high - you are always exceptional. I just don't find the story engaging.