All Comments on 'Once Upon a Time at a Swing Party'

This is a hot story, but please get yourself an editor. You make so many mistakes that it is difficult to really get into the story.

Also, don't rely on your spellchecker. They don't pick up on words that sound the same, but have different meanings. One example is when you mention that you had "scene" something. I know you meant "seen," but you need to reread your writing carefully.

I just LOVED this story, it was sexy and funny at the same time! Please write some more?

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Too funny! I had to stop drinking Coke just to read this!

This story is why one you should go to meet and greets before going to a play party.

That being said...........GODDAMN THAT WAS HOT, AND FUNNY AS HELL!!!!!!

I thought the story was more than a bit unbelievable but still good. Maybe a comedy of errors? I think it would make a great movie though. I had to laugh at his predicament, being so young and horny and walking into a party for seniors. I have to wonder if he ever contacted the last lady, the only one who seemed to be a little more normal. In my years of parties, I loved the way the older ladies treated me. It didn't matter if their husbands were watching us or wanted to join in. I was always game for the added pleasure.

Will we ever know what mom wanted to talk to him about?

Would love to hear about more escapades for them

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