All Comments on 'Once Upon a Valentine's Day'

That was HOT!!! You really should continue the story *****

Wow that was so hot, can't wait to see if the husband was up for it.

A second chapter for this hot story would be much appreciated.

I like the way you write -- getting to the point without becoming lost in minutia that doesn't matter. I also like your point of view. Your story telling skill kept my interest up and that was a nice way to end the story -- there could be more, but there doesn't have to be. Well done. Thanks.

Yeah, you really need to add a second chapter to this story. Great job.

Fantastic story - thank you for sharing.