All Comments on 'One Bad Night'

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MigbirdMigbird10 months ago

Well paced, tumescent. Like how the story develops, characters emerge. The closing sex scene wonderfully erotic, and getting there was just as much fun. By the way, each piece you’ve shared unique, character driven and romantic. Nice.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Amazing!!!

Aoife_from_UlsterAoife_from_Ulster10 months ago

Brilliance! I loved your character build, the interactions. The grace of Lupe, the loving rescue and the embarrassment of Jack. It was as if I was right there with them. The diner and then the transition to the next date. This was just a wonderful read. I would love another chapter. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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