All Comments on 'One Cage to Another Pt. 01'

And bad even there.

Great start! If you had placed this in sci-fi they would have kicked you back here. I can't wait to read more. My own two cents, for what they're worth, you can never have too many angsty HEA's. Hopefully this is just the start of a long, lovely story.

I gave serious thought as to where to put this, as it's my first time writing and submitting anything like this so I wanted to do it right. I decided that the nonconsensual aspect of the story, at this time, is bigger than the SciFi/Fantasy stuff, so I put it here. I already submitted the next two chapters, have the fourth roughly done, and started the fifth, so there's more coming for sure!

Been looking for a cross between sci-fi and non consent. seems i found it :D

JC

Glad you enjoyed it!