All Comments on 'One Day at a Time'

Of just how glaringly STUPID we, each and every one of us, can be when our own inner demons conspire to sabotage any success we might have in finding true happiness.

There's more of this tale, yet untold. If I were the writer, I would need a break. It can't have been easy to write. Hell. It was gut- and heart wrenching to read.

Great work! Now, please finish the story.

I found this to be a thoughtful and well-written story that does what few on Lit do, which is get into the complexity and not always pretty aspects of relationships. Nice work.

Very well written ! You had me at the end when he kicked her out . Great twist with a lesson to be learned.

Loved the story, albeit the bittersweet ending. I wish it didn't end when it did. Too much time wasted loving each other.

Would love to know more about their future...Do you plan to continue this story?

Thank you for your kind words and spending time to comment.

I like lose ends.

I love my characters, I live through them and have their names in my mind the whole time I write about them.

I wouldn't do justice if their love ended up happily but slowly dissolved later on in life...

So, no, that's it. It's how I feel now.

Thank you again!!