by carlieplum
I really enjoyed this. The fairy tale feel towards the end was a nice twist, seeing as we knew how the story would end from the very beginning!
If anything, I would have liked this to be drawn out a bit more, you created a very believable atmosphere.
This fairy tale story touched the little girl inside of me....Thank you for the good read.
Simple, romantic, well drawn characters and setting...It was really lovely...Good luck in the contest...
A little bit rough around the edges, but who can resist a fairy tale? Nicely done.
Took one look at you, threw up and left - forever. All done.