All Comments on 'One Day My Prince Will Come'

by carlieplum

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mostlyintactmostlyintactover 12 years ago
Great!

I really enjoyed this. The fairy tale feel towards the end was a nice twist, seeing as we knew how the story would end from the very beginning!

If anything, I would have liked this to be drawn out a bit more, you created a very believable atmosphere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This fairy tale story touched the little girl inside of me....Thank you for the good read.

SimoneLisbonSimoneLisbonover 12 years ago
Really Lovely

Simple, romantic, well drawn characters and setting...It was really lovely...Good luck in the contest...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it.

A little bit rough around the edges, but who can resist a fairy tale? Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Your Prince arrived

Took one look at you, threw up and left - forever. All done.

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