All Comments on 'One Evening in the Attic'

VERY nice! One or two little minor typos, but not to the point of distraction. I wonder if we still do need disclaimers at the head of such stories though...don't we all know this stuff by now? Doesn't anyone visiting the site know that we are talking about forbidden fruit here and that's what makes it so sexy?

Very nice story! It's good to get away from the "norm" of tiny waisted, big breasted barbie-doll girls to something more real. Because as much as I enjoy other stories on this site things become more and more mundane with the women. Your story however had a very nice buildup and an excellent climax. I had to pause a couple times ;) while reading it! Please keep them coming!

Although the BBW thing doesn't do anything for me, the story was well written.

enjoyed

<i>In the second before I sank myself totally into what we were doing ... something caught my attention, a little something, something I wouldn't think on until later, much later.</i>

Did I miss where this was clarified, are you saving it for a future chapter, or did you just forget to tie up that loose end?

I appreciate you writing a story about a BBW because thats what I am and it makes me feel good that someone appreciates a bigger woman. Plus I look at it this way, there's just a lot more of me to love thats all! lol Keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed this.

I like it

And you think obesity is erotic???

Good story I really enjoyed it. Would love to see morte like this........... :-)

That was really, really good! Definitely not what I expected! Hopefully there will be a few more chapters, especially with the teaser that was dropped :)

Thanks for writing it :)