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by petersza

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blondsublesblondsublesalmost 7 years ago
Nice build up

Good job on character introduction. I just wish there were more to read. I know that it's only part 1 so, hopefully, it will pick up quickly. Still, good work:)

Bree

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Mealmost 7 years ago

Looks promising. I'm intrigued.

Jay545Jay545almost 7 years ago

The slow burn. Looking forward to further chapters.

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLalmost 7 years ago
Need more!

Wonderful build up.......... waiting for more...

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 7 years ago

So far, so good. Looking forward to Chapter 2

fishingrod48fishingrod48almost 7 years ago
Great Start

I like the character development, well done. Five stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fantastic

Really grabbed my interest. Just reread before starting chapter 2.

SB

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