All Comments on 'One for the Team Ch. 09'

there should be another part where the headmaster gets nailed for the murder

Thank you for this story and for enteratining us here, enjoyed it immensely and what a twist at the end..will justice ever be done...? poor Charlotte but maybe her own demons took her via the sex drugs and good old rock-n-roll..? xxx

so where is the ending

Michele, you have truly done it again. I for one, loved how you wrapped it all up. Thanks.

Though I'm annoyed that I ruled the headmaster out as not being aware of the brothel and thus not a suspect. I suppose I shouldn't have underestimated him.

All in all it was really good. I certainly didn't expect to get sucked into a mystery story on fucking literotica.com. It would be fine work even without the sex, and that's about the highest praise as you can give something around here, I think.

Thank you, Michelle.

Excellent story, couldn't wait for the next episode.

Thank you xx

I have to admit, I was really hoping Charlotte and Robert were cooking up some way to fake her death to keep both families quiet and have a happy life together. This was not the ending I was expecting but it's another quality series from you. I'm sure some folks are going to object but you got another *5 from me. btw, nice heels in your bio pic ♥

This was an amazing story. I loved the relationship between Charlotte and Robert before it ended. I'm deeply saddened that Charlotte died and never got live her life. I just wanted her to be happy.

Excellent job

Sigh, I keep returning to this heart-breaking story and every time I do I so wish for a happy ending for Charlotte and Robert. Maybe not the idyllic future that Charlotte envisioned but some way they could be together even if clandestinely. Nonetheless, a masterpiece xxx

Great story. It's pretty realistic too. I've seen so many Trans women get killed or commit suicide. It's sad. They are people and just want to be loved. Please write more stories like this and show the real stories. Thank you for this.

Heart-rending