All Comments on 'One Gifted Secretary'

Very interesting story!

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Are you going to write a follow-up to this? It would be fun to see where this goes!

Clips right along, easy to read, and never strays into outrageous territory. I can imagine the federal lawsuits if this was tried today. I wonder, though, how many women would find this type of arrangement desirable? Probably more than a few. Too bad times have changed. Well worth five stars for writing and storytelling.

Thanks to all that read this and the kudos that followed. Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write.

Perhaps there will be one. There's potential drama/conflict on several levels - between Alyssa and JL and/or Alyssa and her co-workers, some of whom wouldn't mind an exclusive thing with JL themselves.

But does seem unfinished, with the romance uncertain with the time frame of 6-monthly IQ tests for sexy secretaries.

....is the exact moves of the game. I'm curious about that bishop sacrifice.

Please continue with the game

This is the first of your stories that I've read, and I look forward to reading many more. You're a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing.