All Comments on 'One Hope in Hell'

Well laid out and story. Could go further but l think the reader can finish it off for themselves.

A very vivid story, and I made a point of reading it. I compare it to The Beautiful People story in the incest category in terms of world development. Fantastic job, I picture their happily ever after in a distant peaceful nation. Keep on writing

Maybe too much violence, but all together a wonderful story.

Yes, it was violent, but in war there is violence. I really enjoyed the interaction with the two former enemies. I would really like to see a follow up story of them living in the mountains, if they make it there. Keep writing this was a good job

Very entertaining as well as realistic the violence the war the loss it combines all to make a very good story deserves a sequel

A vivid, compelling story. You took just the right amount of time and care to develop the whole horrific and yet ultimately sweet journey. I shed tears of sorrow and tears of joy, not to mention feeling the effects of their playtime and discovery of love. My hat is off to you, EdDivers!

War torn in more ways than one, nor even one way or direction. Two people who discovered each other in a civil war in what appeared to be within a civil war. Truly remarkable descriptions of cruel acts within a war and its characters. The romance between the couple was as poignant as the acts of brutal warfare in your uncanny descriptive way of forming words to show people that war is hell, and love is delightful and tender. You deserve more than the five stars I can give you, but the site master doesn't or hasn't yet seen fit to provided for stories such as this. Hope to find addition chapters of what life gave these two lovers.

Thank you...with all my heart.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

good story of the strangeness of war and the world

Vivid, wonderful story. Excellent stuff!!!