All Comments on 'One Hot Day'

Bet you didnt know, Blue balls arent just uncomfortable, they cause a lot of actual pain.

A little short, but HOT! I think that, if the opportunity presents itself again, you should just go with it. Maybe he has a friend! ;-)

A very good story, I like the way sis took control and help little brother out, giving him a fuck he will never forget.

The only trouble now is he will always want to have his sis again...Thanks .........Rich

I'd like to see exactly where it says 2 adults can't "...get it on..." only 1ce EVEN (in total)IF they are related! UNWRITTEN RULE, my ass!

Very well told but I do think she should educate him and let him experience 69 ; don't you ??

...give the boy another chance!

A little short but I always love true stories and I hope she gives her brother another chance. Maybe the writer should try working on her father too. :)

no way this was real the brother sounds like a thriteen year old and the sister sounds like a slut don't say a story is true unless you can atleast make it sound like it is

don't believe what he says I believe that it's true. Sounds true to me and btw ur brother must be one lucky guy.

this would drive them apart if it just ended the way you wrote it. total waste of time to do it just once you would be better off with a stranger atleast then you wont be seeing them all the time. now every time he sees her it will be like being stabbed in the heart causing him to avoid and hate her.

waste of a read