All Comments on 'One Last Gift'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice story

Writing a little rough in places, but the story and line held me.

I enjoyed it.

RomanCEisdeadRomanCEisdeadover 17 years ago
Beautiful Twist

Nicely written from an unusual angle. I saw the twist coming, but wasn't disappointed by it. Thanks for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
erotic was fantastic

Fantastic story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Lovely Story!

Sweet story of a devoted husband who returns from the dead to comfort his bereaved wife. Pure fantasy but written with such a poignant feeling making this story a joy to read. Well Written!

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