All Comments on 'One Magic Moment'

What a lovely version of the 'trip down memory lane' genre. Well done, Ann. I really enjoyed this. Do you have a follow up in mind? I hope so!

Good job!

5

You never disappoint. Fantastic story and journey.

always worth reading your work!

Noooo it’s over already hehe loved 🥰 it

So very hot! I was dripping! Always love your stories!

Best Regards,

Kathy

Almost made me jealous to those two ladies. Still was a pleasure to read and fantasize along with and enjoy the trip down memory lane. Had to laugh about the Satan's doorbell and the ding dong part though. Thanks

Great character development as always, Ann! I always look forward to your literary works.

What a story! I have always like these kind of stories people from a person’s past bring old memories to the front. Lynda (with a ‘y’) got to do her crush, that was good piece right there. A good trip down memory lane for all.

Take care

WOW! Its been a while I saw a story from you and wondered if you stopped writing! Thanks... Somehow this seems like it should continue!!!

That's extremely fine writing. I could imagine reading a less explicit version of the story in a literary magazine.

I wondered initially why Lynda was so ready to reveal her orientation, but, of course, that became clear later.

well done reminded me of carol thanks be well happy and safe a fan shayne

Terrific story. Thank you for sharing it with a long time fan.

We all have fantasies. Plucky Lynda got lucky. Good for her.

As always, a truly good story that draws you in. Thanks for continuing to write and inspire.

I love the characters you create. So intensely enjoyable.