All Comments on 'One Magic Night'

by BrenKyveli

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bearsladybearsladyalmost 10 years ago

Very hot. Any hopes for more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Above and beyond emotions

Well done. Written as if you've had the experience yourself. Certainly know how to convey a woman's thinking.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Absolutely awesome! I want more!

I've waited for someone to finally put magic into erotic stories and make it classy and sexy. I'm an English Major and thoroughly enjoyed this refreshing story. Are we going to see more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Magical indeed

Incredible, romantic and very hot! Loved how you could flit from one scenario to another with ease... Very much a mind fuck and one for the ladies! More please!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing!

Loved it! Most of my fantasys rolled into one delectable story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more please

Your two stories have been the hottest I've read!! More please!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This story deserves a fucking award! Jesus Christ that was hot! Wow...just..wow

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