All Comments on 'One More Kiss'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
one more kiss

dripping sensuality. very very hot.

garcher27garcher27over 16 years ago
Good story!

I think I need to go find a face to sit on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
WOW!

I'm in the mood to have sex now.

PLEASE write more stories!

reshmavreshmavover 16 years ago
great stuff

excellent narration. Keep writing more. Loved your style.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
too hot to read ,too hot to miss reading

Never seen such a dream woman, with that uncomparable sensuality in real..

Never seen her written in such gifted and skilled way .

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Absolutely delicious!!

Loved every word... but i think there are still many places on her body that still need kissing.....and teasing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
third

this is the third story of yours i just read and wow..they are all hot. I'd read the rest right now but I can't catch my breath, and I'm at work. Hope wife is horny tonite

IwannadoitnowIwannadoitnowalmost 5 years ago
Very hot!

Well written, and a real turn-on! Would have greatly increased the value by continuing on to finish the story with the same vivid description technic as he cleaned her up and finished off her cream pie. And she would have been in orbit as she went off again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Plantation owner?! I like my erotica without white supremacists. Slave ownership is a real goddamned turnoff.

Will527Will5274 months ago

Wonderful rendition of a perfect sex session between two lovers.

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