by JewelTran
As usual, great story. Normaly, I don't comment. But every story of yours I have read, is a great read and this one follows in that tradition.
I am happy to know that when I see your name on a submission, that it will be well written and be a wonderful story.
Thank you for your effort.
As always, great characters, an excellent setting, well written sex and a happy ending.
You know how I love happy endings.
Well done.
I loved this story, as well ass all your other ones. After your first story I immediately read all the stories on your website (sorry I didn't come round to responding to them yet) and I recommend them to anyone that likes what he/she has seen here! I love the way you describe the characters and make them real, yet still fictional. I really hope to see (a long) story on your site again soon! But anyway thanks for the stories you ahve already written, i loved them!
I absolutely loved the story but my onle real complaint is the reference to the motel which in fact was a hotel. Typically a motel is no more than 3 stories high, the doors lead to the outside and there is not a restaurant or room service. The location of the stories is actually a hotel with respect to the room doors are on the inside of the building and it was at least 17 stories high and there was a restaurant inside and room service. Thanks for a great read otherwise.