All Comments on 'One Night in Bangkok'

by Nicole99

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Engage the reader.

Too matter of fact,didn't take me with her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Somehow

it sounds real...

Mastabaitor1950Mastabaitor1950almost 14 years ago
You only live once. You get old quick.

Wish I'd married a lesbian woman. I think they are more mature and there'd be less jealousy in the world if men had a mate who loved fucking women as much as the male does.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Continue.

It was amazing, it jut needed a bit more details. It was really good though.

JustinLondon01JustinLondon01about 1 year ago

Sounds real. You sound a bit sad you didn't hear from her. Would've liked to hear more about your trepidation going up to her room or did you think you were only going for the view. Has whetted my appetite for more of your writing... a vew years old now but quality stands the test of time.

JustinLondon01JustinLondon01about 1 year ago

Oh yeah PS that was my first comment. Many years reading, new account

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