All Comments on 'One Night of Sin'

i loved it sohot,

wished Ron lived next to me, wow, i would on him every week for sure

very much a turn on

bullshit

Your story about Ron, and his huge cock, does not ring true. If his cock was as big as the wife said it was, and streched her as much, how come the husband, could still feel her tight cunt, just the day after when she fucked him

It was a hot story until the last minute....

Extremely awesome story. Well written and thought up. The onky error was in one of your paragraghs on page 3, it seems like you're referring to the husband but you used Ron's name a few times.

Other than that, killer story.

Great story but as with most of the great stories on LIT you spoil it with extremely unbelievable culmination of events towards the end of the story.

Loved this story from start to finish.

Can't wait to enjoy some more of your work.

Thank You.

Trying to destroy the dreams and aspirations of black men. According to them, and a lot of white women, and men, once you go black you never go back.

Personally, I tend to agree with the 'once you go black, you never go back'. I'm a white male and I went black after 40 years of marriage to 2 white women. (30 yrs & 10 yrs) Been divorced 18 yrs now and mostly have sex with two black guys, at the same time. Once in a while I run across a black lady and she visits me.

I did like the story but the ending surprised me.

The technology was too advanced for 2006. Great story until the morning after and the follow up.

Well written as plot kept my interest so that I could not put it down. Makes you dream!!

Hot Story, black preg risk would have made it hotter. Certainly held my attention

Great sex scene. No revenge on hubby? Shud have fucked black neighbor more

The reveal was way too matter of fact.

Basically she just had a revenge fuck that he deserved.

She should divorce the bastard.

Bill S.

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

Loved it (minus the ending). A good hot revenge fuck, even better was that she was a white woman begging to get fucked by a black guy. Bravo. My husband was an asshole, I enjoyed many revenge fucks with black and white and cleaned him out when we divorced. Uggh, OMG more!

Cute twist.

FYI: Husband's name became "Ron" for a paragraph:

"By the time Ron got home that evening, I was ready to start fulfilling my pledge. My hair and makeup were as near to perfect as I could get them, I was dressed in a sleek, cleavage displaying dress that Ken liked so much, and I had prepared his favorite meal. Ron was somewhat surprised but accepted the new me with so much enthusiasm that as soon as dinner was over he wasted no time getting me into bed."