All Comments on 'One Night, Our Night'

This reads almost like free verse. Thanks for a good first effort.

It does absolutely sound like poetry. It is absolutely beautifully written, i want an experience like that - hot but incredibly romantic...

I loved "snapping her nose on the way" sounds like something i have done, also liked " if any other woman had existed...".

Other than the nose bit this is a ridiculous flower strewn story. Dripping with sweetness. I always liked "For 15 years I've picked up after you, if that isn't love, what is..." (Fiddler on Roof-paraphrased).

But this might be better for Feb. 14th.

Well done.