by ronde
Wow. Surprise ending. Easy five stars. I’d change nothing.
My issue is, should I share this with my loving wife?
I loved how you super slow-rolled Barbara seducing Ricky and getting him to open up to the idea of seeing her as a woman. It is very true a woman needs to know she IS desired. You never overdo the sex, and that's wonderfully different. It's tender, touching and you transitioned into them loving each other (logically for the story) after Jason's unexpected death.
I truly don't think any woman would be "ok" with sharing her husband with an older woman, regardless of the circumstance; to me, that's a stretch. For some reason, the site let me rate, but wouldn't load this very last page where Ricky meets and marries Beverly. Had I read that, I would have rated a 4. I strongly believe the story would have walked well simply by keeping Barbara heavily involved, like grandmothering Ricky's kids, as you postulated.
thank you for the work you put into writing this sweet tender story. It's wonderful to see how polyamory can really work.
A wonderful story of love and affection which is missing from most stories on here.
Well written and heart-warming. Thank you!
Lovely story of love, affection and caring. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us. 5*+